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I really liked it. I think this is the first poem of yours that I have read and it was really good. I can totally relate to it and feel ...

This poem caught my attention as well and it was really good. I really enjoyed reading it. I didn't see anything that Jack saw. I think he covered it all. ...

Loved it!! Keep up the good work! I didn't catch any errors...but like Meshugenah said there might be some. Can't wait to read more!

LOL!! Don't ya know it?

Thanx a bunch. I am thinking about making a part two but i have writters yeah. Hopefully, though, the writters block will go away soon so that I can maybe ...

Oh don't say that. At least you can write poems...when it comes to poetry, I suck.

Sure...that's what you want us to think. LOL!

LOL!!! bulletproof you are crazy! It's a very interesting song...makes me wonder about you. LOL!

The Black Rose, you are crazy! LOL! That was very interesting and funny!

I agree. It's good and all, but you are taking forever just to get the story going. If it is a short story, then, maybe you should take some stuff ...

Yeah pretty much...but I'm still a bit annoyed at the world. I can't really explain what is going on cuz its confusing to me too. LOL! I've got one screwed ...

Thanx for the crit. I thought it was quite good myself when i wrote it but you never know.

I agree with Liz and Mattie. It was really good and I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!

I liked it...but it was sad. Adorable too. I agree with Shreik..if i spelled that right. Good job though. I can't wait to read more.

I like the song too.